Thursday 26 June 2014

jack and jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill they got a bucket of water Jack. Jill fell down the hill. They got to a castle that had a bucket of gold. They went closer and closer. Jack said " we should go back home because look there is someone is coming!" "Who is it?" said Jill. It is the queen and king run for it. They lived happily ever after. The end.                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

1 comment:

  1. Lilly, I really like your Jack and Jill story. My favourite part of your story is when Jack and Jill fall down the hill and find a castle with a bucket of gold. Were they rich?

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